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    Life for Life

    Life for Life just a Poem for Thought

    By: Bruce Bradley

    I am who I am and ife has made me this way.
    We try to fit in caring what others might say.
    To want to trade lives would be all so fake.
    Be whom you are the difference it will make.

    Trying to fit in the world there is a price to pay .
    Acting to be happy to get along each day
    Refusing our wrongs our hearts will ache.
    It always feels better to give and not take.

    We mold our feelings as if they are clay.
    We will have to be ourselves someday.
    Do what’s right so there is no mistake.
    We know that there is much at stake.

    Life is hard and tough a game we play.
    To have life change all we have is to pray.
    There will be a time you will fail to wake.
    The angles will take us to drift like a snowflake.

    With the lord on our side we need not sway.
    Giving your life to the lord makes leaving OK.
    Selling your soul for life it's the devil's to take.
    It takes belief to save us from the big bake.

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    A little cliche for my taste...the rhyme pattern is rudimentary.

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