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    Registered User spally's Avatar
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    Unhappy past by

    when i was young i used to think,
    that gowing old was something only in my dreams,
    that it would never happen to me.
    yet every morning i open my eyes,
    i'm aonther year older, another day wiser.
    where has the time gone, where am i now?
    who is this person that i have become?
    the fun and the games have all faded away.
    it's all about school, work, and making a living.
    but how can you live a life when it just bast you by?
    when i went to bed i was just but a child,
    yet when i opend my eyes i find
    that i'm now an adult.
    so when i blow out these candles,
    and make my eighteenth birthday wish.
    i'll think of the childhood that just past me by.

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    ummm.. this made me very sad.. this is how I fell too
    Life is such a toy (sigh)
    the poem could be improved though, grammatically.
    Though the thought is a very strong one.
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