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    walls

    break down the walls you live in. let some one in. don't hold yourself up in.that priosn in your heart.
    your afriad to let some one in close,so you shut the door, put up your walls, can't you see the walls that surround you they are what keep you at bay, they are what harm you,
    they keep you locked up inside
    show what you fell, don't keep hiding it,
    the things that you hide will eat you alive.
    take down your walls your not alone,
    the world is full of pain,
    you just need to let some one help you through.
    if you let them help, they can show how to take down your walls

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    nice work, i feel what your trying to get across.

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    nice one... u really let ur ideas out in a simple and stern way

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