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    Lunacy becomes me loki456's Avatar
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    The Valley

    wow, never knew writing one poem would lead to another... as you can tell, work is quite boring at the moment.

    btw no hidden meaning here. unless you want there to be

    The Valley

    I wandered a valley wide and long
    Amongst the strewn branches and a path went wrong
    Betwixt the bright burning lights and a darkness eerie
    I found myself shattered, wanting and weary

    The path was lost, in memory it remains
    The protagonist fought against insanity and vain
    His mind bogged at the calamity in hand
    For if strife befell, in a path lost be his last stand

    The nights veil lifted and brought with it day
    His eyes peering through tempered light at the intended way
    For I have wandered a valley wide and long
    Amongst the strewn branches and a way went wrong

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    aha! in lil ol WA its a public holiday.....sun shining etc etc.

    When is the Raven going to arrive? sounds nice and eerie
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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