Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: Heart of Ice

  1. 11-17-2009, 11:41 PM #1
    Dark Muse
    Dark Muse is offline
    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    Within the winds
    Posts
    8,905
    Blog Entries
    964

    Heart of Ice

    A heart like
    the snow
    forever waits

    for your breath
    warm as the
    wind

    to melt
    this coffin of ice
    away...

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. 11-18-2009, 08:32 AM #2
    ur_shadow89
    ur_shadow89 is offline
    D UnKnoWn sOuL ur_shadow89's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Pearl of the Gulf & Pearl of the Orient Seas
    Posts
    61
    Send a message via Yahoo to ur_shadow89
    simple but with deep meaning... nice, i like it.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. 11-18-2009, 01:36 PM #3
    Dark Muse
    Dark Muse is offline
    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    Within the winds
    Posts
    8,905
    Blog Entries
    964
    Thank you

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. 11-18-2009, 02:12 PM #4
    Sampson
    Sampson is offline
    Registered User Sampson's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2009
    Location
    "swimming language seas"
    Posts
    192
    this image of a "coffin of ice" is remarkably potent! nice poem!
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. 11-18-2009, 09:09 PM #5
    stephofthenight
    stephofthenight is offline
    :) Stephweet :) stephofthenight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2007
    Location
    East Texas
    Posts
    1,544
    Blog Entries
    77
    I really like this

    "Be careful of quotes you find on the internet, they may not always be true" -Abraham Lincon-
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. 11-19-2009, 04:34 AM #6
    Mrig
    Mrig is offline
    Registered User Mrig's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2009
    Location
    India
    Posts
    149
    hi it's nice poem...I always feel peoms are very personal

    only i cannot relate warm quality to breath!

    Wots do you say!

    cheers!
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. 11-19-2009, 09:39 AM #7
    Pendragon
    Pendragon is offline
    Not politically correct Pendragon's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    Location
    Blue Ridge Mountains, SW VA
    Posts
    21,250
    Blog Entries
    133
    A wonderful little poem
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Heart Of Darkness Questions
    By caseofthex in forum Heart of Darkness
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 04-07-2009, 10:49 AM
  2. Poems Of A Chinese Student
    By warlik in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: 12-27-2008, 01:55 AM
  3. A loving heart
    By romantic novel in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 11-16-2008, 09:25 AM
  4. The heart of Anne Shirley
    By Aprillis in forum Anne of Green Gables
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 06-06-2005, 07:48 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules