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Lady Moon
Lady Moon
Your cold body enthroned above distant sphere watching in retracted silence still, even in your movements. Ascending- descending wrapt within skye blanket a lone single empty socket. Pulse: through my blood mutely you whisper and laugh in the back of my skull. So alone your beauty enshrined your immortal death undenied; born again only unto the night!
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: america
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when i read, i am inspired to write more. the skull reference was like the moon, and appropriate. the born again was good, as the moon rises. two thoughts i had: that the laughing may have a reason; and that the moon tries to stay aloof, but the sun reveals the lady's beauty.
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Thank you very much for your insightful comments, and I am glad it could be an inspiration.
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Haribol Acharya
Join Date: Jun 2007
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This illustrative poem is startlingly touching; some staggering images have added splendor to the poem
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*bows* Thank you very much
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