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Old 11-04-2009, 11:26 PM   #1
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Lady Moon

Lady Moon

Your cold body
enthroned above
distant sphere
watching in
retracted silence
still, even in your
movements.

Ascending-
descending
wrapt within
skye blanket
a lone single
empty socket.

Pulse:
through my blood
mutely
you whisper
and laugh
in the back of
my skull.

So alone
your beauty
enshrined
your immortal death
undenied;
born again
only unto the
night!
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when i read, i am inspired to write more. the skull reference was like the moon, and appropriate. the born again was good, as the moon rises. two thoughts i had: that the laughing may have a reason; and that the moon tries to stay aloof, but the sun reveals the lady's beauty.
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Old 11-04-2009, 11:50 PM   #3
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Thank you very much for your insightful comments, and I am glad it could be an inspiration.
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Old 11-05-2009, 12:18 AM   #4
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This illustrative poem is startlingly touching; some staggering images have added splendor to the poem
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Old 11-05-2009, 12:20 AM   #5
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*bows* Thank you very much
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