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    Till the day I die

    Hiding in the shadows where you cannot see me
    This love I have for you is what keeps me alive
    I cannot intrude in what you have
    But I can admire from a distance.
    Looking at the light of my life

    I realise that my search for perfection has ended
    I always wanted to reach the stars
    Now I see them close up each time I stare into your eyes

    I know I can say that you are the core of my world
    While I cannot tell you how much I love you
    I’ll carry it in my heart
    Nurturing it
    Till the day it’s possible for you and I
    Or till the day I die
    Don't try to hack into hell they've put up extra firewalls

  2. #2
    Registered User
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    i am very happy cause iam the first visitor to your poem..
    i like it very much ....do you know?? somtimes i envy those people who express their real feeling toword thier lovers...AHHHHHHHHH
    have a nice and useful time

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    Crazy Freak
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    That is very good! I like it! It holds much deep emotion. It's very good!
    "Without you I could survive, yet life would be as nothing."

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    lol it's not written to someone I love, it was written for someone to give to someone, but thanks for the compliments
    Don't try to hack into hell they've put up extra firewalls

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