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    World apart

    Sitting here looking at you
    I know you’re the one
    You’re the one for whom I care
    Your eyes sparkling like diamonds
    And has depth deeper than the sea
    It will be impossible to forget you
    But even more impossible to love you
    You see no matter how hard we try
    Our lives will stay separate
    No matter how long the time
    We are and will stay
    A world apart

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    Quote Originally Posted by sycho_warrior
    Sitting here looking at you
    No matter how long the time
    We are and will stay
    A world apart
    i like this - how the line and thought breaks with subtlety, right between "time" and "we."
    rather poignant - i like the understated pathos.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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