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    Easter wings

    Lord, who createdst man in wealth and store,
    Though foolishly he lost the same,
    Decaying more and more,
    Till he became
    Most poore:
    With thee
    Oh let me rise
    As larks, harmoniously,
    And sing this day thy victories:
    Then shall the fall further the flight in me.

    My tender age in sorrow did beginne:
    And still with sicknesses and shame
    Thou didst so punish sinne,
    That I became
    Most thinne.
    With thee
    Let me combine
    And feel this day thy victorie:
    For, if I imp my wing on thine
    Affliction shall advance the flight in me.

    By: George Herbert






    What do u guys think about this poem? Its cool how the length of the lines change as the speaker talks about positive and negative things.

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    So very tender and beautiful! Extremely well done!

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    I like the flow. I have never read this poet before.

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