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    kristopher
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    Find your sanctuary

    An artist will paint his picture
    A dancer does the dance
    The actor plays the role
    And I have discovered the power of the word
    This is our sanctuary

    The sky turns dark
    Seasons will change
    The weather can be cold
    But here it is warm
    Humans grow old

    Buildings may collapse
    Old problems come back to relapse
    Children are born
    Stars are created
    Some people are hated
    In my possession is the authority of the word
    The power to be heard
    This happens in the sanctuary

    Here what is blocked
    Can become unlocked
    There will always be questions
    Perhaps not enough answers

    But that's okay
    An artist will paint his picture
    A dancer does the dance
    The actor plays the role
    I write words
    We are in our sanctuary

    The special place
    To utilize our creative space
    Look inside yourself and reach out
    Find the sanctuary that awaits

    Everybody has one
    Last edited by kristopher; 03-26-2006 at 12:46 PM.

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    An artist paints his picture
    A dancer does the dance

    The actor plays the role

    And I have discovered the power in a word

    This is our sanctuary
    these lines are great with simplicity and verity ...
    There is no polite way
    of being happy

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    kristopher
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    Thank-you for that awseome feedback.

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