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    LOVE dreams HOPE

    love
    dream
    hope
    nothing but pitful words
    well to me

    love is of the weak minded
    someone who thinks they are needed
    someone who craves it

    dreams are for losers
    no one want to dream
    i rather do it

    hope are for prayers
    prayers waiting for a answer
    prayers with no answer

    i have said what i have said
    no more can be said
    ...or is there still more
    Everyone can kill, but it takes guts to do it.

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    I like it
    dead on the inside, i've got nothing to prove
    keep me alive and give me something to lose

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    Not too shabby. Grammar is a bit off it seems, but the concept is nice.

    Ordered and structured..
    To think is to blog is to distract is to stop is to destroy is to die is to think therefore I am not good enough

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