Ode to Saturday Morning
Nothing lasts forever,
Not the sun or moon or stars,
And love may last a thousand years,
And never once be ours.
©Steven Hunley 2013
http://youtu.be/bS3ggi9dAeE Kenny Loggins Heart to Heart
Ode to Saturday Morning
Nothing lasts forever,
Not the sun or moon or stars,
And love may last a thousand years,
And never once be ours.
©Steven Hunley 2013
http://youtu.be/bS3ggi9dAeE Kenny Loggins Heart to Heart
It's a good one Steven. The last line is a killer.
"But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
"In flames and torment?""Oh, yes, I do."
"That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said."Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
"Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.
Did love ever last a thousand years?
For those who believe,
no explanation is necessary.
For those who do not,
none will suffice.
lol. Does the same principle apply to
And war may last a thousand years and never once be ours?
Nice to see you posting here Steve.
Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb
Although I didn't understand how the title fit in this, the rest of it was very nice.
I wrote it on Saturday morning, the poem first, and it didn't have a title! I'll have to think up a title that's more fitting!
Thank you all for commenting, I don't usually do poetry.
Regardless of the title I found it lucid and profound.
I must create a system, or be enslaved by another man's. ~ William Blake
Captivity is consciousness,
So's liberty. ~ Emily Dickinson