i like shallow
because it wallows
on nothing and
when it
rains
it lowers
and
bathes,
depthness,
the conduit
of its light,
rises
and then
lays
weightless,
its
shadows
idless,
mellow
and peak
ripeness,
flawless
feels
tideless.
i like shallow
because hypeness
plys
dice
but slight is
air umcompressed
wild
and
fresh
such is less
a true best.
Last edited by cacian; 05-20-2013 at 08:23 AM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Senseless
...and yet you manage to capture the absolute shallowness of your skill beautifully here. Congratulations - this is your true best!
Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb
I thank you both for your comments
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
My pleasure.
Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb
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