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    streams

    poetry is giddy
    when it wants
    pity
    to speak
    of words
    in
    loaded
    rhetories
    shapes
    in
    heavy
    parodies
    morose
    is
    reveries

    but then
    it is tricky
    when it flips
    lippy
    to
    curse
    bursts
    of feelings
    emotions
    heave
    stealing
    happiness
    from rearing
    such is
    teasing
    never ending
    leaping

    but then
    it is
    seeming
    when it
    comes in
    readings
    of beautiful
    meanings
    and
    symbols
    of sympathies
    to life
    the world
    streams in poetries
    that real
    in memories
    of dreams
    such is realm
    Last edited by cacian; 05-18-2013 at 06:13 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I like. If I may add a suggestion, end on "of dreams" over "such is realms."

    Is retories a noun for rhetoric? Wasn't sure on that one.
    "We sat around, scratching the earth with our feet, half looking up for a sign of the end. And all the while it had long since come and gone." Alexi Murdoch

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