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    charms

    the sun shines
    my heart finds
    timeless of sounds
    sing song and mimes
    rythme is mine

    the wind chimes
    my self consoles
    to waves of breeze
    peaceful is pleased

    the rivers swell
    i take to strolls
    across the fields
    the wheat browse
    woodland is crown

    the clouds round
    i feel the swave
    rain always winds
    seasonal blooms
    nature reaps tunes

    the day flies
    i stumble faith
    it tells me
    life is purpose
    kind
    i keen to same

    the night rives
    i know i sigh
    beautiful thoughts
    aboard the soul
    love is a host
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    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I hear mostly two accented syllables per line and the thoughts the words bring to my mind do seem soothing and charming as the title suggests although I probably don't understand correctly all of the lines.

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    YesNo thank you
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    In spite of it all, we have to give Cacian some due credit. It is because of the things Cacian tells us that we often think twice before we unconsciously and solemnly ****up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cafolini View Post
    In spite of it all, we have to give Cacian some due credit. It is because of the things Cacian tells us that we often think twice before we unconsciously and solemnly ****up.
    LOL such is life screwed up but then wait isn't poetry suppose to even it out I am a great believer in words healing.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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