Thanks for reading. I'm glad it spoke you you.
Live and be well - H
Thanks for reading. I'm glad it spoke you you.
Live and be well - H
I'm drawn by the cadence, it lingers long enough but also moves forward, around and back when the time is right. The metaphor gives life to words that populate our heads, and brings wonderment to a thing called the writing process. Well executed, Hawk.
"But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
"In flames and torment?""Oh, yes, I do."
"That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said."Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
"Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.
Hi Haunted: nice to see you aroundThanks very much for reading and enjoying this poem. I'm glad it spoke to you so vividly. Now when are you going to treat us to a poem? Hope you're cooking up something nourishing to the spirit. Look forward to reading it when you're ready to serve.
Live and be well - H
Ah, appreciated. Working on other things at the moment. I'll return in a few weeks. Keep the good stuff coming so I'll have something to come back to!
"But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
"In flames and torment?""Oh, yes, I do."
"That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said."Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
"Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.
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