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  1. 09-27-2012, 12:52 AM #1
    windweaver
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    Mini-poem

    My first poem (in English

    moonlight
    seaside
    Morning--
    Midnight--

    melody
    low/high
    meandering...
    mesmerizing...
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  2. 09-27-2012, 08:50 AM #2
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    Sorry but no,Windweaver...try to develop that a bit more. Build some sentences with the same material...or try something else.
    He noblest lives and noblest dies
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    Richard Francis Burton
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