love at first sight
is like a burst prize
it looks a pink bright
against a true brass
in a gold cast
once the thrill's past
the shine becomes brash
diverging full crash
against a noise trash
love at first sight
is like a toy 's blast
that chases fast plays
and never takes place
Last edited by cacian; 08-10-2012 at 03:40 PM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
So much taking place and never taking place?
Indeed it is all in the mind or a mind set.Originally Posted by cafolini
All the chasing and the sweating and in the end it is not really love as much as lures and lust.
That is one way of looking at it.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
A very dangerous, controlling position, that leads to illusion without illusion. The person ends up claiming that anything people claim is strictly in their head; not his/her case, which is "the Truth."
Last edited by cafolini; 08-10-2012 at 02:40 PM.
It would not be called love at first sight if it was not.
It would be called falling in love.
First sight reminds me of one night stands. It lingers around it or thereabouts.
Just call it love. Simple is often best.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
What about third sight?
What about it?
Hang on you can't jump second!
Second sight then third in this order plus I have heard of sixth sense and never of third sight.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
So much taking place and never taking place?this made me smile but I really like these lines:
love at first sight
is like a toy 's blast
that chases fast plays
and never takes place
I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.
Penisve thank you very much for reading.
Glad you enjoyed it!
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
The syntax is murky, muddling the meaning.
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