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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Breaky Fasty

    Underneath the sapphire sky
    Sail across lake of orange juice
    To the shore of muffin bushes
    Crunch the path of cornflakes
    Climb the tower of newspaper
    Leading to the milk cascade
    Look out to locate the Temple
    Kneel at the altar of marmalade
    Worship Toast, Bacon and Eggs
    Punt along river of golden honey
    To the jungle of the coffee trees
    Lay beneath one as bitter nectar
    Slides down glistening emerald leaf
    To drip gently onto your tongue

    Slowly drift back to dreams

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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Fifty views! Thanks for reading it everyone!

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    Quote Originally Posted by MystyrMystyry View Post
    Fifty views! Thanks for reading it everyone!
    Love the imagery and the succinct yet direct focus of breakfast foods with the quotidian beauty of nature. Simple yet profound like poetry should be. Good job
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    how come I missed your breakfast! It must be heat...

    To me it reads as something at a crossroad of recipes and prayers, as something that tastes good as it "drips slowly onto my tongue!"

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    Thanks Adolescent

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    Thankyou Bar22do

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