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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    The Weirding

    Yesterday I lost
    ten minutes

    Nine:fiftynine
    to be exact

    They tell me
    flatlined

    No explanation
    given

    But was woken
    just in time

    Though no credit
    not by them

    But the sound
    of car alarms

    Every last one
    in the city

    All erupting at
    same time

    I went to see
    for myself

    The cause of the
    commotion

    Was met only with
    darkening sky

    Revealing no
    answers

    Birds dropped to
    the ground

    As the noise
    went on

    Trees danced in the
    howling wind

    And minty musty
    odour carried

    On the streets
    in the park

    They stood there
    still as stone

    Like extras in an
    old movie

    Atmosphere thick
    and heavy

    Ion storm inversion
    imploding

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    Still, on a chalk plateau Bar22do's Avatar
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    You're thinning and thinning, Mystyr! next poem will be one drop àf rain sadly sliding the left margin of your thread... you keep reminding me always some other celebrity - Saramago this time! Weird!

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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Thanks Bar22do

    It was just a hasty 'I haven't posted a poem in a whole day!' effort.

    Reading it back now though, I think I may be able to do something with it in the future

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