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    The Shipwrecked Sailor

    (Para Don Gabriel)

    Memories of my forgetful mind
    Come as dreams at midnight--
    Crimson lips and olive curves
    Of dead melancholy whores.

    Love in the sea and stormy wind
    Like loud waves swallowing tides
    And wrecking paddles and canoes
    Also dies as if in time of cholera.

    One hundred touching hands
    Hold my back, my willing arms
    Reduced to bones by seasons,
    Wrinkled by years of solitude.

    Chronicle of supple cotton pillows,
    Knitted blankets, and warm bodies
    Is long-buried in my dimming eyes
    That have seen a death foretold.
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    "You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same."

    --Jonathan Davis

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    The Shipwrecked Sailor

    (Para Don Gabriel)

    Memories of my forgetful mind
    Come as dreams at midnight--
    Crimson lips and olive curves
    Of dead melancholy whores.

    Love in the sea and stormy wind
    Like loud waves swallowing tides
    And wrecking paddles and canoes
    Also dies as if in time of cholera.

    One hundred touching hands
    Hold my back, my willing arms
    Reduced to bones by seasons,
    Wrinkled by years of solitude.

    Chronicle of supple cotton pillows,
    Knitted blankets, and warm bodies
    Is long-buried in my dimming eyes
    That have seen a death foretold.
    "You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same."

    --Jonathan Davis

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