Hello Everyone, I am new on these forums.

I would appreciate your suggestions and critique of this short story
Hanging by Golden Threads

Which I wrote over the course of a day.

-The story's plot involves a suicide attempt
but does not reflect my current mental standing
so please do not worry about me or my mental well-being.
Unless you want to, of course.

For the story, please see the attached link for pdf format.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/ag58wg...%20Threads.pdf