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    dreams

    wandering same old cold streets
    i find myself feeling a little
    inspired, a little wired on life
    i'm smiling at the thought of
    settling down with a wife
    renting a place in city of lights
    and living high on love
    and i know i'm young
    and i know i don't know
    what i want just yet
    but the idea of a living room
    lit by more than a television set
    is stuck in head
    and as much as i've shaken it
    the image is lodged somewhere
    in my cranium, there to stay
    and a blind man once told me
    faces change, so as mine grows
    older and evolves i just dream
    of rolling over on a sunday morning
    in the autumn and noticing the leaves
    falling slowly by the window
    and when i dream this dream i know
    that the warmth, the soft golden glow
    eminating from my beaming face is
    nothing more than patience
    and a passion for chasing dreams
    because faces change
    but dreams are born fully formed
    and whether they're fulfiled or forgotten
    they're always gonna look the same

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    Nice poem. Especially the idea to compare the mutable physical forms with stability of dreams. Although it sounds strange, because the notion of dreams is usually connected with something illusory, your poem succeeds to prove the opposite, whatever the meaning of the word dreams may be - an experience during the sleep, or a symbol of a lofty wish.
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    A beautiful poem! it flows like a stately river, rocking almost, rocking to a place where dreams for sure are not illusions, but often goals achievable. Passion and Patience are Dreams' best servants! You were inspired, thank you, Sampson

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    I much enjoyed this poem as well as I always enjoy your poems. Reminds me of a young man trying to figure out whether he should propose marriage or not.

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    I liked this a lot. The last three lines reminding us that dreams are really something of amazing stability in our lives. They can pull us through the toughest times.

    Thanks, Sampson.

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