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    Your Aura

    Your Aura

    By Humble Wolf

    Your aura is perceived to me as a majestic light guiding me home through a world of darkness. Every moment between then and now I am filled with a euphoric sense of sublime wonderment. It’s as if your light glistens and washes out every other distraction in my life, so in a way I am blind to all else except for you. All these years of searching finally over; though the trek has just begun, but in a different direction. Now with this rekindled motivation and perception, I am now striving for the utmost importance of outcomes. So it is here that I rediscover the way I thought I could never feel. Warm, full, humbled, I was just a traveler blinded in darkness with only one hope, one chance; my fixed vision now centered on your warm glow. You are my sun, my wonderment, the brightest star and most beautiful thing I have ever known, I am so taken back by the way you have outshined everything else in this existence. So now I bestow upon you my heart, I am running now, tripping over my own feet in the heat of this one moment to get to you, always running never stopping. I will be there soon, with the means to do everything within my power to get there. Be my beacon; please don’t let me slip back into darkness. But if you are here and darkness should yet again return I cannot wait, because I know your light will outshine anything to get me home.

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    This is very beautiful. I wish I could write like anywhere near this. You have a strong sense of how to say things. Like what words to use and exactly how to arrange them. Thanks for sharing this.
    "Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today." -James Dean

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    I agree

    That was very moving, I enjoyed it a lot.

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    Beautiful , expressive words pal...keep writing this way and may you one day become a best seller

    i love these kinds of writing
    Smile to the world and world Smiles Back!

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