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    Ephemera

    In the desert there are lake beds
    With their lakes gone ten thousand years
    That might teach us all a lesson
    About how life should value fears

    When you look down on the playa
    You think that nothing could grow there
    But there are creatures in hard cases
    That would make liars of your stare

    There are many little lives there
    God only knows from whence they came
    Four hundred million years they've lived
    Yet some who dwell there have no name

    There are desert shrimp and Triops
    That house such tiny little brains
    You might think them incapable
    Of predicting hard summer rains

    But when monsoon waters pool there
    Although it brews a brine with salts
    A million little souls awake
    Their salad dreams the water halts

    If we left our own hard cases
    In the harsh heat of some plain
    Perhaps we too could rejoice when
    Our lives awoke to pouring rain
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    "If we left our own hard cases
    In the harsh heat of some plain
    Perhaps we too could rejoice when
    Our lives awoke to pouring rain"


    I love the allegory your poem weaved to my understanding. We all know adversity will come at some time. Best to thank our creator for our opportunity for growth; for we are at our best when we overcome our trials.
    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 12-02-2009 at 03:41 PM. Reason: left out the /
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Thank you cousin, exactamente.
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    I feel in it also a sort of invitation to surrender, to let go and to trust, patiently... it "pays" - - - I witnessed, in January of a desert, outbursts of millions anemones' blossom which transformed hills and plaines into a kingly carpet of red and green....
    What a beautiful, beautiful poem...

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