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    Another Lonesome Night

    Boredom that I am used to.
    Glow of the screen.
    Coming of an unknown morning.
    Books on the table.
    (One more chance to
    get my answer - failed)
    Music that fills the soul,
    phone that empties pocket.
    Love full of doubts...
    Promisses of a missions impossible.
    A humiliating astrology
    saying: “You will spend
    a romantic evening with someone nice”...
    meaning.... you from nowhere,
    I guess...
    Last edited by free; 12-01-2009 at 08:16 PM.
    ...........
    “All" human beings "by nature desire to know.” ― Aristotle
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own.” ― Robert A. Heinlein

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    This is beautiful and I love how each line lets me gasp with hope only to expel it with a sorrowful sigh!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Oh man... I get this..... completely (wish I didn't) Great Job!

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    I liked the matter-of-factness of this. Very much your own. The ending took me by surprise in a good way.

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    Thank you all. I am really flattered by your comments.
    ...........
    “All" human beings "by nature desire to know.” ― Aristotle
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own.” ― Robert A. Heinlein

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