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    fall

    autumn leaf loyal
    warm sepia burst in
    firework finish,
    down-to-earth steady
    nets red-cheeked divers
    in hushed consolation
    for icy portent;
    that hasty frost-breath
    bullies bittersweet, corkscrew,
    radial farewells
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    "(fall's) radial farewells"... hopefully leaving space for the new to come...

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    this was my first thought, of autumn's continual return, with the words, 'loyal' and 'steady'.

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