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    Where the Paths Cross

    Restrict me from my sleep,
    For what we say and seek,
    In begging dreams we keep.
    For far too weak are we,
    To make our souls so see
    That the earth belongs to thee.
    You wrote our paths to cross
    But we’ve left you at a loss.
    So grant me precious sleep,
    So on this cross, I may not weep.
    Last edited by Lads of E3; 11-23-2009 at 04:40 AM.

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    Original Poster Buh4Bee's Avatar
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    I am not sure why you are switching between we and me. It could be confusing. The underlying religious message works for me, but I am also religious. The idea that in our dreams we are comforted, but not necessarily what God wants us to keep, is a struggle most humans deal with, as you already know.

    This is a daily struggle for me and sometimes I just could care less that God exists. Anyway, this is not a place for a religious conversation.

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    Registered User tailor STATELY's Avatar
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    Love it.

    note: "For far too weak are we,"
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Cheers.

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