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    Caravans

    acacia whispers
    it's not my first caravan
    silent moon ascends
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    This is stunningly beautiful, so much captured within so few words. I loved the atmosphere and the setting of this poem.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    ésprit de l’escalier DanielBenoit's Avatar
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    Exactly what Dark Muse said. Stunning! I loved "acacia whispers".
    The Moments of Dominion
    That happen on the Soul
    And leave it with a Discontent
    Too exquisite — to tell —
    -Emily Dickinson
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVW8GCnr9-I
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckGIvr6WVw4

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    Thank you both for your kind words.
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    So much said with so little. Very very nice. I loved it.
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    Still, on a chalk plateau Bar22do's Avatar
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    And this one is simply perfect, pregnant with atmosphere and meaning...! a pearl..

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