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Thread: My Stroll in Summer

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    My Stroll in Summer

    Morning stroll,
    The park, so calm;
    Sun rise smears orange,
    Morning, born to sip dews.

    My bare feet,
    A luminous shine,
    Dancing on the ground
    As crispy as sand grains.

    Bluebells and daisies,
    Early waking to welcome birds;
    Lilies and tulips,
    Illuminate the lands for the gardeners.

    Each step I take,
    The bees and butterflies hear,
    They flood above the greens,
    Dreaming to sniff succulent joy.

    Morning stroll,
    I, a blissful flautist,
    Wander into the crimson light,
    Feeling the heat of zen peacefulness.

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    i like the bees and butterflies hearing your steps. the sunrise smearing orange is good also.

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