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    Tick tock.

    Inside
    The wide eyed boy is playing with matches
    Building dens
    Walking to school
    Drinking water from the tap
    Wet faced
    Wolf whistling
    Laughing too loud
    With yellowed teeth
    Receding gums
    Moles and warts
    As I swing toward the sun
    Fishfingers for tea
    And gout
    Hernia and grass stained knees
    Jenny died last Friday
    Charlieís got a shadow
    That ainít a rabbit
    I saw a double rainbow
    It landed in the field
    Where the cowslips grow
    Ears growing hairs
    Letís have a game of war
    We can be on a bus
    And I can have a bomb.
    Kaboom
    Letís look at the good porn
    Where she doesnít want to
    And we rape like the Vikingís
    With horns in our hats
    Macho men shagging
    Eye lids sagging can no longer
    Jump the hedge
    My Edge is a soft verge
    I have a butter knife in my pocket
    And Iím going to do you
    Good.

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    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    A bit of stream-of-consciousness going. I see. You still have that strong, distinctive "voice." If CloudFlare lets you edit, please, please, please dump the unnecessary apostrophe in Vikings. Simple plural just need an "s."

    Somewhere on this site from years and years ago is a piece o' er, verse by yours fooly titled "I Jave a Butter Knife and I Know How to Use It."

    Good to see ya postin' again,Lad.
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    Tick-tock, tick-tock, waiting for death.
    Why do we wait so long?
    It seems to take for ever
    to run out of breath...

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    Thanks Auntie and Hawk. Wow it’s like old times ��. It was a mash up of boy and man as I’m sure you saw. Running out of breath for me can go on forever Hawk. I’ll never be ready. Hope you are both well and happy.

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    Great stuff Jerry - Charlie's got a shadow That ain't a rabbit.
    ay up

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    Thanks for picking up on that line Pren. Good to know it was got. Thanks again.

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