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    talent

    blame can corrode
    the mind
    the truth
    narrows
    it does not understand Poirot's
    world's grief is
    the elite
    in words brief
    to self construct
    has a talent that best manage
    disparage
    which weighs years to balance
    when mischief is aberrant
    Wordsworth would want
    it for a solemn
    J'accuse is enthused
    it would hit the News.
    Last edited by cacian; 08-21-2019 at 07:38 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by cacian View Post
    J'accuse is enthused
    it would hit the News.
    Wonderful couplet to end on. I couldn't agree more.

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    Pompey many thanks for reading and feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Hi, cacian,
    I liked also your beginning
    "blame can corrode
    the mind"
    "You can always find something better than death."
    Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm, The Bremen Town Musicians

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Hi, cacian,
    I liked also your beginning
    "blame can corrode
    the mind"
    Danik thank you.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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