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    rubric

    cubism
    is a soliloquy
    on heroism
    what does not change
    shape
    does not get faith
    the omen to other
    gates
    the leader to upper states.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by cacian View Post
    what does not change
    shape
    does not get faith
    Ah, suddenly I understand your poetry! Never mind me if I try to tell you about meter (keep developing sharp images and sounds though). I can see you know perfectly well what you want to do. Nice job!

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    Pompey thank you for the feedback. I never have meters in mind when I write.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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