cubism
is a soliloquy
on heroism
what does not change
shape
does not get faith
the omen to other
gates
the leader to upper states.
cubism
is a soliloquy
on heroism
what does not change
shape
does not get faith
the omen to other
gates
the leader to upper states.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Ah, suddenly I understand your poetry! Never mind me if I try to tell you about meter (keep developing sharp images and sounds though). I can see you know perfectly well what you want to do. Nice job!Originally Posted by cacian
Pompey thank you for the feedback. I never have meters in mind when I write.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
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