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    Divorce

    Every detail written,
    by two hands
    upon fresh paper.
    Unerasable letters flow into a work in progress,
    a one-of-a-kind story,
    their newest original manuscript.

    Each hand grasps a corner
    tries to tear a straight line
    down the middle
    between each word.
    So each can have their own half
    of a story
    with jagged edges.
    Last edited by Shadowlight; 07-26-2019 at 11:48 PM.

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    Very nice and to the Point.

    I can see paper, hands, writing, working, trying,

    Then the deconstruction and hint of healing.
    My hide hides the heart inside

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    This is very well and very punchy.
    Very well done !
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Enjoyed your poem... made me sad. "Jagged edges" is a nice touch.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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