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    A Good Woman

    Through thick and thin
    You stood by me

    In good times and bad
    You were there as well

    When I didn’t deserve you
    You still loved me

    When I needed you most
    You loved me even more

    You’re my right arm
    You’re the beat of my heart
    You’re my every thought
    You delight me with your presence

    You’re a good woman and
    I’m fortunate to be married to you

    Happy Birthday, Dear
    Last edited by DRayVan; 07-15-2019 at 08:32 AM. Reason: grammar

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    Congratulations to both of you. A good marriage is a mighty fortress.

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    very well put and nicely done.
    positive is always good.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Glad you liked it

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    Congratulations ... and nice poem

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    Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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