There's an intensity present in your vivid description of a tortuous situation. I think it would have added some intrigue to have added some stanzas of any potential racing thoughts the narrator may have had on why they could possibly be in the situation they were in after the line "you try to remember the last thing
you were doing before this happened." I think an internal digalogue could have revealed how a person would feel in this situation, adding depth. No one is innocent and I wonder what dark secrets could have been bestowed to the reader. Or perhaps the victim is truly a perfectly good person and how would they internally handle the blame.
I was hoping to comment and write a response to your initial offering to the site "Run". It made a substantial impression on me and am sorry not to see it on here anymore. Some friendly LitNet advice, Not every poem that doesnt get responses is worth deleting. If you only seek praise or even just interaction, you may be disappointed during slow spells on here, and you may be quick to leave if that is all you seek. But to have content whether good, bad, or mediocre- there is still something people can derive from them all and you never know when someone may have wanted to comment on them weeks later