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    A Thought of My Life

    Myself is lying in a pool of filth and disgust,
    My body floats atop the thickening puddle of my own urine,
    I twist in abhorrence of what has exuded forth from me,
    A stream of tears escape my eyes at the mourning of my death,
    In the thinning liquid of my own willful creation,
    My weakened body slowly sinks.
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    (sigh)... evocative at the very least... touched a nerve for sure

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