life
is like a turd
floating
along a river
of pain
losing bits
of itself
and picking up
bits
as it bumps
into other
turds
along the way
until
it reaches
the ocean
where it
slowly
breaks apart
and
eventually
completely
dissolves
life
is like a turd
floating
along a river
of pain
losing bits
of itself
and picking up
bits
as it bumps
into other
turds
along the way
until
it reaches
the ocean
where it
slowly
breaks apart
and
eventually
completely
dissolves
MM, interesting comparison, lol
Enjoyed your poem
Kiz
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein