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    Adieu

    In the wake of the sun's demise,
    I've heard a voice a pleasant rustle;
    from above it shook my center,
    I didn't know from where to enter;
    sudden spirals appear and entice,
    egregiously surmise what I realize;
    tender the tone of her whisper,
    dispersing a hello a tongue twister;
    her being floating through time and space,
    never-mind it isn't the human race;
    bulging depth of my eye's silhouette,
    reciting an allegory with my last breath;
    I shout and tremble over the horizon,
    dignified I thought the cape of a bison;
    a feather stuck inside my heart,
    it flew and grew metastasizing the art;
    of self reflection and painful visions,
    she didn't know if it was given;
    I threw my essence on the ground,
    she didn't care if it was found;
    found and lost a paradoxical state,
    she couldn't see nor relate;
    bestowed upon my deepest sorrows,
    luminescence of charm and it follows;
    it erupted inside our fragile minds,
    a volcano filled with lost souls;
    the gravedigger cementing the holes.
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    Mesmerizing. Enjoyed very much.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Enchant Me

    Your very being a desire for answer
    Lament not your unassailable mystery
    Enchant me with your dreams

    5-14-2005

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