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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Dogs

    The daytime moon
    Our of place falls from the sky
    To hide behind concrete and
    Mongrels f*cking
    Fast food wrappers
    Do the lambada
    In the hot hot
    Breeze
    And I stab her over and over
    Again
    With a Swiss army knife
    My uncle gave me last christmas.

    Mother always said
    He's no good.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    JB still has that touch.




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    This one I like! Nice finish. one of your best.

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