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    Hello ,I'm the new member Rosy. I really enjoyed reading your points

    Do you like this poem. Why?

    ...call you a book
    not a candle
    When turn your pages
    never reach the end
    How generous
    you are
    To the petals of a flower
    When dry in your arms.

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    It's pretty good. I generally don't critique poems, but the membership here will be happy to.

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    Welcome !

    Enjoyed your poem. I like the metaphorical use of book and candle as well as the minimalism... is English your second (third, fourth,...) language ?

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Enchant Me

    Your very being a desire for answer
    Lament not your unassailable mystery
    Enchant me with your dreams

    5-14-2005

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