Do you like this poem. Why?
...call you a book
not a candle
When turn your pages
never reach the end
How generous
you are
To the petals of a flower
When dry in your arms.
Do you like this poem. Why?
...call you a book
not a candle
When turn your pages
never reach the end
How generous
you are
To the petals of a flower
When dry in your arms.
It's pretty good. I generally don't critique poems, but the membership here will be happy to.
Welcome !
Enjoyed your poem. I like the metaphorical use of book and candle as well as the minimalism... is English your second (third, fourth,...) language ?
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 01-12-2019 at 05:54 PM. Reason: Welcome !
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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