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    image

    love is
    the spitting image
    of a privet
    when glad
    it turns vivid
    glamour is a plumber
    when sour
    it is a tower
    about to fall in a hour
    call the rivet
    or it is a dip no skip
    would lower.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Scans nicely... very abstract... love it !

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
    Enchant Me

    Your very being a desire for answer
    Lament not your unassailable mystery
    Enchant me with your dreams

    5-14-2005

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Scans nicely... very abstract... love it !

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
    tailor STATELY many thanks for reading
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I enjoyed the flow of the poem.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiz_paws View Post
    I enjoyed the flow of the poem.
    Kiz_paws thank very much for reading
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I like the foraging for words effect.
    ay up

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    Quote Originally Posted by prendrelemick View Post
    I like the foraging for words effect.
    prendrelemick bonjour mon ami !!!
    nice to see you back.
    Thanks for reading the feedback is interesting I am liking foraging haha
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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