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    star struck

    there is an
    emotion hiding
    wishing to be riding
    up and up
    to the skies
    and sliding
    a star would
    catch it from
    diving
    too much truth
    can be blinding.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I think of emotions as an energy that seeks the earth like the roots of a rose bush... they seek moisture and darkness and solitude... the branches reach for the starry skies like thoughts and technologies in pursuit of an other worldly... the flower is manifestation... and the perfume is the truth you are writing about.

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    Celestial Orb thank you for reading and the feedback
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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