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    Manifolds

    Manifolds

    Eyes that feel,
    Eyes that heal,
    Making things real
    Or lifting them into realms surreal

    The hands of mind
    Creating a sanctuary for the exploring soul to find
    Eyes that lock,
    Intertwining minds and souls resonating to a ethreal clock

    Adding dimensions and hidden spaces
    A whole universe behind those smiling faces
    Or a whole world of emotions
    emerging from abstract notions

    No one is truly alone or lost,
    There is hope for everyone, even Faust
    Everything has meaning in this multidimensional multiverse,
    Hopefully even this innocuous piece of verse.

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    Uplifting. Enjoyed your poem.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    I agree with Kiz-paws, I enjoyed. It's hard to explain something as abstract as the soul writing within its own abstract qualities, but I think you pulled it off here. I liked the honoring quality of awe to it all as well.

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