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    a poem of DorothyHernandez

    Very barren
    The redness of the sunlight
    Sand queen
    Only kiss and smile
    The beach ran scared
    The golden mile.

    It is desperate
    Heart wheezing
    This chilled and salty air
    This silly boy
    Look deep gray ocean.

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    Shame on "Dorothy"

    I have withdrawn my original response due to an act of plagiarism...
    Last edited by kiz_paws; 09-11-2018 at 08:31 AM.
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    Didn’t I pretty much write this some time back?

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    Didnít I pretty much write this some time back?

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    What’s going on here?

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    Why are you reposting a bastardised version of something I posted a year or two three back? I don’t get it.

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    Why are you reposting a bastardised version of something I posted a year or two three back? I donít get it.

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    Go and plagiarise elsewhere

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    I will now repost what you have copied. It's called a poem by Jerrybaldy. Not Dorothy Hernandez.

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    The original is much better of course.

    I should ask the mods to take it out.

    If you donīt succeed, I would regard it as a very awkward homage.
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    Come tell your story Dorothy Hernandez. You have nothing to lose

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    Nobody is going to attack you. If you fear words on a screen. I’d love to know what inspired you to bother. You took time and effort to post. Please reply.

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