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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Slug

    Slug

    What a sad excuse!
    They say but for the grace of God
    And yes so thankful I be
    But pondering now, it's just so odd

    I mean just look!
    So slimy, so legless so armless
    What's the point of you??
    But hey at least you're harmless

    So slithering slow
    With shiny trail of revulsion
    An elongated blob
    Like a self contained avulsion

    At least unaware
    Of your unfortunate misfortune
    Because if you knew
    You'd have stayed in the ocean

    What purpose
    For a creature such as you
    No neck! No head!
    Looking like a streak of poo!

    I suppose though
    That you don't criticize me
    So I should leave off
    And go brew a pot of tea

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    And better this
    than grab a shaker of salt
    and pour it liberally
    to create a tortuous gestalt

    Thanks MM !

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 09-05-2018 at 12:07 PM. Reason: bug
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    I enjoyed this reflection, MM!
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Thankyou Tailor

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    Thankyou Kiz_paws

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    LOL, I love this! Its fun and witty and subtly teaches the lesson of realizing one's judgement is all a matter of one's perception. Perhaps, best than to not be too critical of one another and just mind your own darn business!

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