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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Triangular pile of s hit

    I don’t like the look of her or him
    He’s up himself
    She thinks her s hit doesn’t stink
    The gay boy is in stereotypical pink
    Fat lady has a mobility bike
    Smoker man is coughing
    Over his alcoholic mate
    Who has pissed in his pants
    In the same spot
    Where two hours ago
    He pissed in his pants
    The lady is playing the roulette machine
    A dog is sniffing another dog’s
    Arse
    A fish and chips wrapper
    Is showing off in the wind
    A homeless man is begging
    By the cashpoint
    A cat squeals as it’s crushed
    Beneath some Audi wheels
    A mother cries
    As mothers do
    A brother pleasures his sister
    Secretly
    People stare at their phones
    People stare at their phones
    Peolple stare at their phones
    A leaf falls from a tree
    Majestically
    The sun rises
    Stops for a moment
    For a honey bee
    Who’s busy
    Office girl has a latte
    Extra large
    In her least favourite skirt
    A slug on the pavement
    Seeking wet patch
    Ice cream and churros
    Says a sign
    Fresh pork says another
    Best in town
    ‘Bugger’
    Says the pig
    Contemplating his existence
    In a Disney kind of way
    A bell rings as a shop door opens
    People stare at their phones
    The girl with the ribbons in her hair
    Feels no pain today
    She’s over him
    People stare at their phones
    Quarter pounder with cheese
    Please
    Kebabs all types
    With all sides
    People stare at their phones
    An energy drink
    Empty of energy
    Relaxes, crushed
    In the morning sun
    That man has a crumb in his beard
    ‘Atheism is temporary’
    Says the sign
    Your Christianity is terminal
    I imagine
    Fresh bread is baking
    Ostentatiously
    Annoying
    The Eccles cakes
    Somebody peed blood
    And posted their
    Frankie and Bennies
    People stared at their phones.
    People stared at their phones.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    I don’t like the look of her or him
    He’s up himself
    She thinks her s hit doesn’t stink
    The gay boy is in stereotypical pink
    Fat lady has a mobility bike
    Smoker man is coughing
    Over his alcoholic mate
    Who has pissed in his pants
    In the same spot
    Where two hours ago
    He pissed in his pants
    The lady is playing the roulette machine
    A dog is sniffing another dog’s
    Arse
    A fish and chips wrapper
    Is showing off in the wind
    A homeless man is begging
    By the cashpoint
    A cat squeals as it’s crushed
    Beneath some Audi wheels
    A mother cries
    As mothers do
    A brother pleasures his sister
    Secretly
    People stare at their phones
    People stare at their phones
    Peolple stare at their phones
    A leaf falls from a tree
    Majestically
    The sun rises
    Stops for a moment
    For a honey bee
    Who’s busy
    Office girl has a latte
    Extra large
    In her least favourite skirt
    A slug on the pavement
    Seeking wet patch
    Ice cream and churros
    Says a sign
    Fresh pork says another
    Best in town
    ‘Bugger’
    Says the pig
    Contemplating his existence
    In a Disney kind of way
    A bell rings as a shop door opens
    People stare at their phones
    The girl with the ribbons in her hair
    Feels no pain today
    She’s over him
    People stare at their phones
    Quarter pounder with cheese
    Please
    Kebabs all types
    With all sides
    People stare at their phones
    An energy drink
    Empty of energy
    Relaxes, crushed
    In the morning sun
    That man has a crumb in his beard
    ‘Atheism is temporary’
    Says the sign
    Your Christianity is terminal
    I imagine
    Fresh bread is baking
    Ostentatiously
    Annoying
    The Eccles cakes
    Somebody peed blood
    And posted their
    Frankie and Bennies
    People stared at their phones.
    People stared at their phones.
    Excellent poem, Jerry.
    The fish and chips wrapper showing off was a really cool line.
    The affection for the phones is very well played here -- we seem to live in a time where anything goes on around us, and our faces are stuck in our phones... *sigh*
    Well done, I enjoyed this very much.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    If you turn this into an "app," people will stare at it on their phones.

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