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    On his deathbed

    Sebastian seriously ill lay dying
    His wife, Vicky, by his side crying
    He roused from his coma briefly
    And his pallid lips moved slightly
    He whispered "Vicky my darling,"
    "Hush" she said. "Rest, no talking"
    But he was persistent in his distress
    "I have something I must confess."
    "There's nothing to confess dearest"
    She replied weeping "Please rest"
    But Sebastian was not about to cease
    "No, no. Vicky I must die in peace,
    "I slept with your sister, your mother,
    Your best friends, and your brother"
    She whispered "I know my sweet one"
    "Now let the poison's work be done"

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    Ha ha ha! Good one!
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    This is my favourite of all of your poems that I have read over the years. Good job Biggus.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Hahaha, oh my, that was unexpected and a comical end!

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